很不错哦! There's a couple of small mistakes, but overall very impressive! Re: 今朝， my friend told me it`s archaic, and really only used in writing nowadays, so I wouldn`t worry about that!

My bad on missing out his name. As you said, it`s Onra, and he`s the main man! Haven`t listened to Chinoiseries pt 2 yet, Chinoiseries pt 1 is incredible though! Hope the sequel lives up to its predecessor! Gonna go and check it out now!